We are delighted to share that our director – [name removed] is currently in Denver area. I would like to set up a F2F meeting at your location to understand your 2019 marketing demand generation plans and to discover top growth hacks of competitors. This is part of our worldwide awareness campaign where senior experts from [name removed] consult top fortunes to unfold unparalleled results with the aid of data.
How about 11 AM or 3 PM tomorrow or next week? Let me know what time works for you and I shall send you an invite accordingly.
Thanks and I look forward to your response.
Ok, first things first, your name is not Tom Johnson as no one with a good command of the US-English language would use the word “shall”.
Second, what the hell does it mean to “consult top fortunes to unfold unparalleled results with the aid of data”? I mean WTF?
And I hate the phrase “growth hacks”. There are no hacks. Only hard work and great ideas.
Lastly, it is very presumptuous to ask for a “F2F” (ugh!) without really helping me understand how what you offer could actually improve what we’re doing.